第一章 段落结构的问题 1
第二章 句子的问题 10
滥用从句 11
不会使用短语 16
不会使用并列结构 18
下笔时缺乏考虑 19
It引导的从句达到泛滥的程度 23
需要使用从句的情况 27
第三章 在写作中经常用错的表达 30
平行结构 30
one和ones被滥用 35
意义过于模糊的几个词 35
写作时应该尽量避免使用的词 37
第四章 急需掌握的表达 38
第五章 习作评改 72
四级作文 72
Passages 1 Welcome to Our Club 72
Passages 2 On the Spring Festival Gala 75
Passages 3 Students Selecting Their Lecturers 76
Passages 4 Volunteer Recruitment 78
Passages 5 Should the University Campus be Open to Tourists? 80
Passages 6 Happy Teacher's Day 81
Passages 7 My Most Favorite Program 83
Passages 8 The World Is Getting Smaller 85
Passages 9 Reading Selectively or Extensively 87
Passages 10 How to Succeed in a Job Interview 88
Passages 11 What Would Happen If There Were No Power? 90
Passages 12 Traveling 91
Passages 13 Books 92
Passages 14 Bicycle in China 93
Passages 15 Cooking 95
Passages 16 Television 96
Passages 17 Can Money Buy Happiness? 98
Passages 18 Advantage of a Job Interview 99
Passages 19 The Two-day Weekend 102
Passages 20 Global Shortage of Fresh Water 103
Passages 21 Practice Makes Perfect 105
Passages 22 Getting to Know the World Outside the Campus 107
Passages 23 Harmfulness of Fake Commodities 109
Passages 24 Do"Lucky Numbers"Really Bring Good Luck? 111
Passages 25 Don't Hesitate to Say"No" 112
Passages 26 How I Finance My College Education 114
Passages 27 Is a Test of Spoken English Necessary? 115
Passages 28 Positive and Negative Aspects of Sport 116
Passages 29 The Students of China 119
Passages 30 Love 121
Passages 31 The Ever Growing Population 122
Passages 32 Underground Cities:Are They P？e? 124
Passages 33 Living in the City or in the Country 126
Passages 34 Smoking and Health 127
Passages 35 Computers 128
Passages 36 Education 129
六级作文 131
Passages 1 The Celebration of Western Festivals 131
Passages 2 Should One Expect a Reward When Doing a Good Deed? 132
Passages 3 Traveling Abroad 134
Passages 4 A Letter Declining A Job Offer 136
Passages 5 Say No to Pirated Products 137
Passages 6 Health Gains in Developing Countries 139
Passages 7 Positive and Negative Aspects of Sports 141
Passages 8 Are Pets Good for Mankind? 142
Passages 9 Teenage Smoking 144
Passages 10 Buses vs.Private Cars 146
Passages 11 Should Parents Buy Computers for Their Kids 148
Passages 12 Advertisements 149
Passages 13 Family Planning 151
Passages 14 City Life Vs.Country Life 152
Passages 15 Failure 154
Passages 16 A Letter Welcoming Your Schoolmate 155
Passages 17 How Do I Finance My College Education 157
Passages 18 Reading Selectively or Extensively 158
Passages 19 Don't Hesitate to Say“No” 160
Passages 20 Do"Lucky Numbers"Really Bring Good Luck? 161
Passages 21 My View on Fake Commodities 162
Passages 22 My View on Job-Hopping 164
Passages 23 Haste Makes Waste 165
Passages 24 Why Do I Take the College English Test Band 6? 166
Passages 25 Should Firecrackers Be Banned? 168
Passages 26 Wealth and Happiness 170
Passages 27 Fighting Against Crimes 171
Passages 28 Economic Development and Pollution 172
Passages 29 Fast Food 174
Passages 30 Travelling 175
Passages 31 Fighting Against Corruption 177
Passages 32 China's Entry into the WTO 179
Passages 33 Success in the Bid for Olympic Games 180
Passages 34 Job Interviews 182
Passages 35 Traffic Jam 183